PITCH FEEDBACK

 I preformed my pitch in front of my media class, and when I was doing it I got feedback from four peers in the class and then got feed back from my teacher as well so that i can look at the feedback and make amendments to my pitch to make my idea better. From the positives and negetives of my pitch it helped me alot because the people in my class are the age range of my target audience so things that they liked I could keep and things that they didn't I could change or get rid of. I looked alot into the feedback that I got back from my teacher and made changes to my pitch to make it better and for it to fit all together and produce a good storyline. When I presented my pitch to my fellow class mates, I hadn't done anything on characters and narrative as I hadn't thought enough into it by this point and didn't know how I was going to encorperate a romantic genre and a comedy genre to make my trailer stand out from other peoples.

Feedback from my 4 Peers;

1. Narrator voice over plus up-beat music to crate the rom-com atmosphere in the trailer. I also like the romantic beach setting of seaburn. 
2. Relateable for lots of people. I also think that the idea for your poster seems good.
3. I like your location of seaburn. I also like how there is a big target audience. The genre of rom-com is also good.
4. I think that its a good setting for a film.

Teacher feedback;